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I first encountered the sentences below on p 121, The Words We Live By: Your Annotated Guide to the Constitution (2004; but the newest edition dates at 2015) by Linda Monk. I rewrote the numerals using digits to ease reading.
[ Source: ] The Ratification of the Conventions of nine States, shall be sufficient for the Establishment of this Constitution between the States so ratifying the Same.
Done in Convention by the Unanimous Consent of the States present the 17th Day of September in the Year of our Lord 1787 and of the Independence of the United States of America the Twelfth In witness whereof We have hereunto subscribed our Names, [...]
The date is already stated as September 17 1787. So to what does the bolded refer?
15Don't feel bad about this one. This is a very difficult sentence to parse even for a native English speaker. – Daniel – 2016-03-23T01:58:25.487
I feel like a comma after "America" (or maybe better after "1787") would have made this a lot clearer, but perhaps it wasn't stylistic or it is just a mistake. – Todd Wilcox – 2016-03-23T18:07:33.473
3I'm a native speaker (and fairly good at reading!) and I couldn't figure this out until I read the answers... :) – Numeri says Reinstate Monica – 2016-03-23T21:23:34.187
1@ToddWilcox Except that proper English grammar (which would certainly be used in an official document) does not allow a comma to separate only two items in a list. – Jed Schaaf – 2016-03-23T21:52:36.477
2@JedSchaaf Never heard of it. Commas after 'and' and 'twelfth' would be perfectly acceptable. – Marquis of Lorne – 2016-03-23T22:54:48.847
However commas are avoid in legal documents, for other reasons. – Marquis of Lorne – 2016-03-23T23:02:02.430
Non-native speaker, figured it out immediately. I suspect, as one of the comments below noted, that it's "the year of our lord" being too much of fixed phrase in modern English that slipped everyone up here. – January First-of-May – 2016-03-24T02:11:38.120