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I'm writing my master thesis in English as a non-native speaker. I start a lot of sentences without an article and one of my lectors (a non-native speaker like myself) found this to be odd and marked every occurrence. My question to the native speakers is: which method would be considered better?
A few examples:
Identification of such failures is usually a tedious manual task.
Automatic identification of such failures would be highly beneficial.
Examination of test data reveals...
Literature review confirms that...
Application of these models shows poor results.
My lector would correct all these examples with a definite article:
The identification of such failures is usually a tedious manual task.
The automatic identification of such failures would be highly beneficial.
The examination of test data reveals...
The literature review confirms that...
The application of these models shows poor results.
While it may be more natural to begin some sentences with an article, this is largely a matter of style and preference rather than grammar. Your tauter style is common in many academic papers. However, under the circumstances, it may be prudent to go along with your tutuor's preferences. – Ronald Sole – 2019-10-14T15:29:04.220
@RonaldSole "Your tauter style is common in many academic papers". Sorry, which style are you referring to? The first or the second one? Unfortunately my supervisor has no preferences regarding style. This is why I'm looking for the most common or correct style. – Fgop – 2019-10-14T15:48:38.593
1"Tauter" means more concise and with fewer words. @RonaldSole is saying your version without the definite article works just fine. – Eddie Kal – 2019-10-14T15:55:08.260
1I don't have any problem with your versions. The suggested alternatives are just weaker. I would write your versions myself and I am a 67-year native speaker ;-) – Marquis of Lorne – 2019-10-15T00:19:35.793