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Does this make sense?
Other achievements he attained...
Or is it "obtained"?
Thank you everyone! This is my first time using this website and you have been very helpful.
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Does this make sense?
Other achievements he attained...
Or is it "obtained"?
Thank you everyone! This is my first time using this website and you have been very helpful.
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If you must use the noun "achievement" (rather than the verb "achieve") and find yourself in need of a verb to go with it, there are possibilities but all of them sound a little bit awkward.
Perform, win, score or gain are the sorts of things I have in mind.
e.g. He performed the remarkable achievement of three birdies in a row.
But it would be less wordy to say He achieved three birdies in a row.
As someone has noted achieve and achievement are already strong words.
Of course achievement works well with the verb to be, as in To have climbed Everest is a stunning achievement.
1You could also use the possessive - "His other achievements include..." – ColleenV – 2017-06-04T12:48:46.040